The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck - DeviantArt At the Santiago household* Lincoln, Lori, Leni, Luna, Lucy, Laney, Lily, Ronnie are inside the house*. Do you losers have any sense of compassion or brains!? Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! Lincoln: *Annoyed & Furious with six "Mean" sisters* What do you abusers want!? Give it back! (tears up.). You can keep trying, but you're just wasting your time! Lynn: (low voice) Maybe it's because we keep bothering him Everyone notices the change in Lynn's voice and face her. When Lincoln is telling Lola about his supposed "bad luck", Lola's gown is a different shade of pink, appearing as it looked in. (sniffles) Sell all my stuff will they? Lincoln Loud, the sole son and middle child of the Loud family, a boy that many would describe as 'unique' and for a magnitude of reasons. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) Lana: (tearful) He might tell everyone in town and everyone will hate us. Now this is not part of my fanfiction Loud House Revamped. Now, let me make this clear! There was no way he could have done anything whilst he was away. A few minutes later, Lincoln wakes up. Mlp Equestria Girls. The heat increases. Lincoln: *Smiles* Thanks babe. And I'm proud to call you 3 my moms and my sisters. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Get me arrested. Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! Tikki, claws out! Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. Need i remind you looneys that its against the law to not shelter one of your own and what am i supposed to do now that all my belongings are gone!? The sisters then walk into the house to hear the slam and to see the parent's devastated faces. . I should've believed you. Lola: You spilt all my cosmetics and wrecked my princess jeep. It's because i'm different from them! The next day, Leni wants to invite Lincoln to her activity, but Lynn interferes, and tells Leni not to bring Lincoln since he's just "bad luck". In Chapter 19, Lincoln asks Lori why they didn't just confiscate his stuff and ground him, saying that would have gotten the message through to him just fine. My coffin. Do you even know what a family is anymore!? However this lead them to. Then they don't deserve furniture either! When autocomplete results are available use up and down arrows to review and enter to select. I certainly am not! EVER!! He assumes his sisters made it. Lori: *Furious to Lola* Why don't you SHUT THE HELL UP, Lola?! Thank you so much! It was actually written years ago when Lincoln was just a toddler and Lucy was a baby. (Previously on The Loud House. At Lynn's softball game, Lincoln disguises himself as the mascot of the Squirrels so he can prove that he is not bad luck. Lincoln: Well my family doesn't think i'm bad luck anymore, in fact now they think i'm good luck. tip: arthur merlin words>1000 sort:hits, Due to the incredible support of the community, we've raised US$252,343.98 with an average donation of $32.14, and added 6450 new members this drive. He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. (They keep searching the house. It really means it. Lincoln gives Lynn one in Chapter 16, but not before. The two of them and Lori (who overheard them say that) now realize that Lincoln believes they kicked him out because they thought he was bad luck. It stings like fuck right now, The secret is blown by Chapter 20, both his feelings, when Lori told him that the family knew he was lying. In the Latin American Spanish dub, Luna's line "Don't worry about it, sis!" Long story short Marinette can no longer transform into Ladybug, Chat Noire is her only option now. Let's go, The rest leaves the house for the movies. Giulia Barbieri, famous all over the world for having killed sin, was walking the streets of RoyalWoods when she meets someone unexpected, who knows, maybe she will become an important figure in the life of that white-haired boy? They all goe upstairs to get ready to go to the movies and 10 minutes later, they all regroup downstairs. Lola: How could he?! Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! But anyway let me know what you all think. Rita: Well.yeah. (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! YOU KICKED ME OUT LIKE I WAS NOTHING!!!!!! At the game, the whole family cheers for Lynn, while Lincoln looks on with boredom. We know that these dumb superstitions were wrong and upset you and we were only being selfish, but you've ruined everything we had. Although Lincoln tries to evade out of this, he's forced into coming by Lynn. Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! This causes Lincoln to get an idea. Until you guys sort this out, until you stop being the worst family ever, I want nothing more to do with you guys. Leni: I know Lincoln is all mad at us, but he'll eventually forgive us. Lynn: (low voice) I know that..But why is it me who always start? Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. . (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. Lincoln: Stop it! I will not be discarded and than used!! They all then went to sleep, Lincoln wakes up and notices a slip of paper on his floor. They go flying, screaming in terror and splash into the seawater.). And it's YOUR faults! This causes her to wake up, and. No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. No Such Luck Aftermath - Moving Out | The Loud House Fanon Wikia | Fandom in: Episodes focusing on Lincoln Loud, Episodes focusing on Ronnie Anne Santiago, Episodes focusing on Lori Loud, and 6 more No Such Luck Aftermath - Moving Out View source Originally done by Jamesdean5842 That's what we just did to him! Loud House Fanfiction. My disgust for them is almost as strong as Edwin's lust for blood. You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). Leni: Lincoln, *sniff* please..we know we've upset you, but it's not nice to shun your own family. You're sorry. (Cries) All my precious tiaras. He has his back turned to the family. The family sees this and gasps in shock.). For the rest of the day, each sister tries to get Lincoln to at least talk to him, but anything they tried to do, he's either ignored it or declined it. Rita: Lincoln, honey. Also, while in the library with Lana, she asks Lincoln (who is feeling awkward about their last night and the strain in their relationship) if he hates her. Lincoln: (low voice) I don't know, surprise me. Lori: (whisper) Let's hope it works. Ronnie, Leni, Lucy, Laney, Luna & Lori: *Smiles at the scene*, Lincoln: *Smiles* And I've got Mr teddy with your name on it. It was me who was at the wrong place at the wrong time! Please consider turning it on! Lincoln: *smiles at Ronnie* Thanks for letting us stay here, sweetie. Lincoln: (Turns around) Don't you guys get it? And why is the house burning? They all leave the living room and enter their rooms. As of 28/5/20, the fic has officially been declared as discontinued due to the author not having any motivation to work on it anymore. We really are very sorry. Luna: You broke my precious axe. Rita and Lynn Sr., who always seem to take the girls' side in any argument or incident where they cause all of the trouble, which leads to Lincoln getting punished for things he had little to no involvement in. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. One, it gets boring when there's no one around and two, don't underestimate what your family will do to you. Finally, I'm finished. DON'T TRY AND DENY IT! You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! Family is shocked.). I cant believe you all locked me outside and sold all my things! He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). No Such Luck Aftermath - Moving Out - The Loud House Fanon Wikia Ten minutes later, they arrive to the theater. Lincoln: *Really enraged* SHUT THE HELL UP, YOU DISGRACEFUL SISTER! Lincoln: (to family) You guys really did it. Luna: We're sorry dude! NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. Lisa's coffee cup reads "01101100", which is "L" in binary code. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. Lincoln brutally broke Lynn's leg and she screamed in pain. We had no idea this family could be so gullible. And you lot are just too chicken to admit that there's no such thing as luck, that Lynn was just being stupid and mean and I'm supposed to be the middle child. You called us horrible names, you hurt us, you said we don't have feelings, that we're the worst things ever and that hurt. You cast me out of your lives, well fine, I don't want you all in my life anymore either! It has been a few weeks ever since Lincoln convinced his family he was good luck. Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. well this is a more social criticism that i would have corrected if i wrote it but don't take it into account it's more of a social criticism than the fanfic i just say i will change this question instead of writing to lori scolding Lincoln i would have done the two talk as equals so that she understands the situation, goes more towards Lincoln, I even understand that it was not a good idea to lie about bad luck, but honestly can anyone blame him? Lincoln: You know what!? I'll just play softball all by myself! However, the Squirrels are struggling to win the game. Thats not how it works! Lana: Gee. You didn't even let me explain anything! Based off a song from Sub Urban, Lincoln befriends a little girl in a freak show after abandoned by his family, Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings (4), Steven Universe & Gumball Watterson & Original Female Character(s) (2), The Narrator/Stanley (The Stanley Parable) (1), The Narrator & Stanley (The Stanley Parable) (1), Your family's troubles are out of control, Steven Universe & Gumball Watterson & Original Female Character(s), The Narrator/Stanley (The Stanley Parable), The Narrator & Stanley (The Stanley Parable), Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings, Steven Universe & Gumball Watterson & Original female character. (But one of them goes more to the Show than to the fanfic). Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Lori: Good idea, but how will we convince him? Don't fight now! Well, time for things to get "normal" and recieve broken bones! You've hammered home your point. (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! Lisa: Easy, easy! Luan: You mean..you really were just pretending!? Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! Lucy: *Upset* It's true. When she sees Lincoln outside his house. He decided to finally hear about what they wanted. Luna: Bro, why you so upset? Sell custom creations to people who love your style. I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! As in, how ill knock your head over heels! You can stay with me until your family realizes they were wrong. You're nothing, but an embarrassment to sports. The give him new videogames, he's declined it. Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! We'll do that. I feel like a nobody now! Rita: Honey, please. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/NoSuchLuckNoSuchLove. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! YOU LEFT ME OUTSIDE!!!! One of the hardest lessons in life is letting go. He really doesn't like us at all does he? When Lincoln reveals himself to his family, he states since Lynn won the game while he was present this means he isn't bad luck. Dont threaten your little sister! Lincoln: Well my family doesnt think im bad luck anymore, in fact now they think im good luck. Leni: I don't wanna. Lincoln: Just come out and say you don't love me. Permissions beyond the scope of this license may be available from thestaff@tvtropes.org. Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? A reject! Laney I can never stay mad at you because I had a feeling you weren't involed in any way. Don't get upset with us! You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast, a disgrace, a loser and the worst sister ever and I! In other words, you've taken everything away from us, you wanted us to feel miserable, you've done it! Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. His family didn't hesitate and ran into his arms. Lincoln spends his days playing video games, reading comics, and drinking milk straight out of the jug. "No Such Luck" was created before "Jeers For Fears", where the latter episode ends with Chandler and Lincoln on friendlier terms, so he is still a, Lincoln slaps Lynn for trying to apologize to him, "my cheek no longer hurts"? Lincoln: So where did this looney belief that i was bad luck suddenly come from, huh!? Luna: Uh..we made you those pancakes.. Lincoln: (irritated) Nice try! Leni: Well, we just gotta give him time to calm down Lola: He had a bunch of time! In the end, Lincoln is happy that his family no longer sees him as bad luck, but only when he's wearing the squirrel costume, much to his annoyance. We'll make this the best day you've ever have in your life! This episode aired in March 2017, and by coincidence in this episode, there is a calendar which has 31 days, and starts on a Wednesday. Its a stupid mascot costume! If you guys only care for yourselves, then stop wasting time being hard on me and just admit the truth. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? Lincoln: (sarcastic) I know, shocker! Hahahaha, For once Lincoln slightly chuckles at her joke, making her happy, They all enter vanzilla and head off to the amusement park. They are looking very heartbroken.). (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. Thank you so much for taking the time out of your day to check out my stories. I can only say that they were the only ones who cared! Lincoln: (angry, talking to viewers) Well, it's been a while since I talked to you. In Chapter 20, when Lynn Sr. destroys a notebook, he thinks it's Luna's, apologizes to her and says he will replace it. Rita: Sweetie, please! Lincoln then picked her up by her ponytail. Mr. Dawkins the art teacher sees Lincoln lazing about not doing any work in his class. Lynn Sr: (nervous) That wasn't us that kicked you out, that was the sisters! After Lynn gets two strikes, Lincoln begins to wonder if he really is bad luck. WHY DON'T YOU SHUT THE HELL UP?! For once since Lincoln returned home, he finally smiled, but not for long as he turns around and leaves the house, Lori: Alright, let's not waste anymore time. (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! TVTropes is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. What's going on here?! Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. It was a note and it read "Please let us talk -sisters". He just played on Lynn superstition and couldn't help himself and used the family superstition to get them to leave him alone. (Both glare at each other) First you threaten me with your lousy pop stick of a baseball bat to make me come to a disgusting game thats nothing but a waste of time, than you blame me for your loss, than you help ruin my life, than youre too stupid to listen to my confession and admit that you were wrong and than at another stupid game you dont even make it up to me and you make me into some silly object! Do Not Sell or Share My Personal Information. If it's ok with you. Luna. (sighs) All because we believed in lame superstitions. (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! This is the first episode to be made in 2017 according to the credits. Lincoln: Youre too stubborn to admit youre wrong, you never admit you mess up, your as gross as you are lousy and you never learn anything! As a consequence Adrien gets reassigned, no longer Chat, but suddenly able to transform into Laddiebug. Lincoln: (sarcastic) Oh how cute..they made that for me. The parents can't think of anything to think of and this proved Lincoln's point, but something popped into Lincoln's head. Cartoons Loud House. (FYI: This was not requested), although i love this version i still have some criticisms Lincoln ripped her ponytail out of her head! Luna: *To Luan, furious* And guess what Luan!? Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. Just tell us and well let you skip it. Pinterest. So now we're even. SON!!! Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? You know why, but you're just denying it! Do you have any sense of care? Lincoln and Ronnie Anne walk away from the four sisters.*. his body was overloading itself, if it continued like this he would surely get sick Lincoln: *Smiles tearfully* Thanks moms and sisters. They get themselves popcorn and go towards the posters for the movies. You took it too far! I don't want to be near you anymore. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. He has sunken eyes, drool dripping from his mouth, his hair is ruffled, he's grasping onto a cushion, surrounded by bottles of water, his skin is very dry. It should have been impossible for Lynn to turn her cap around while doing her good luck ritual, since her ponytail is in the way. That's when I realized I can't be mad forever and I finally let go. Lincoln tries to reason with his family, but their superstitious attitudes don't convince them. I couldn't let go until they took me out. Luna: Well, I guess this is a bad time to give these to him then. While Rita seems to have favored her daughters unintentionally through ignorance, there is evidence Lynn Sr. is doing this knowingly. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). His family didn't hesitate and ran into his arms. Lori: We literally should have listened to Lincoln when he confessed the truth.. Lucy: I guess it's all over. Lucy: Lincoln's right! We did some horrible stuff to you. This tag belongs to the Additional Tags Category. (He then flips over and smashes the trophy case. Lincoln: I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! This won't make you feel better. (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! We were selfish and stupid, we were wrong to be superstitious, we broke the law, we weren't being a family to you, but breaking our stuff and our hearts like this will just make it worse. ), Luan: You wrecked my objects and broke Mr. Coconuts. Actually, there's something I need to do! Me, Lori, Leni, Luna, Lucy, Laney, Lily & Ronnie are now Lincoln's roommates! Laney: Guys this has gone on long enough. he went to all the sisters' events all day non-stop, he didn't miss a single event and just wanted some time to relax. Who's with me? A normal parent would let their child back in and ground everyone that was involved, but NOPE! I thought I could trust the four of you, especially you two, Leni and , I guess when push comes to shove, you're just as bad as everyone else. (But one of them goes more to the Show than to the fanfic) Ronnie Anne: *cracks knuckles* Didn't you hear my warning?! They then headed over to the park to hangout in. Completed timmyturner supernatural kazutokirigiya +16 more #3 .by Like and Vote !! But right now, no! Kicking me out of the house! Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. although i love this version i still have some criticisms Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! I wanted to ask you without anyone spying on us [ The sisters are obviously spying on the two thanks to Lisa's technology, much to Linc's annoyance.]